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I'm trying to decide if I like a refection I took today or if it is just messy. It was a reflection on a window of a cafe / bakery with a couple of young ladies enjoying a beverage with folk walking past their table. Grateful for your thoughts.

Edit: Just realised this is probably not the place to be asking feedback. If Mod would like to move somewhere more appropriate please?
 
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TBH I think it is just messy, sometimes these work and sometimes they don't - there isn't really a standout subject here. :)
 
I think there is something in this, but also agree with @gramps - it's not quite there

I appreciate the added layers created when shooting through glass and the general compression of the scene

Would like to have seen the woman facing the camera to have been sharper and be sat in more light, e.g. her brighter and the rest of the scene a tad darker, but it's the other way round.. hope that helps.
 
Thanks all. I am still trying to work out what it is that I like about it - I have decided I like it - but agree that it is messy and disorganised. Think I’ll have a play with editing and see if others in the series have more probabilities. I think that the cakes and bread would have been better if more evident to show that it is a reflection rather than a collage.
 
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