Doesnt work as well as the one on your other thread.Mainly because you have caught the drop mid air, in the other shot, it has a teardrop which helps explain it in the image.
This one looks like its hovering ?
Also, are you using flash at the front?
For me, the front on lighting is a tad harsh, particulalrly on a steel item - you get away wityh it better on the other brass (?) pieces as it softens the light.
I think....