In the first one the lighting is great but I'm distracted by the proportion which looks odd to me. Her feet, legs and hands seem very emphasised and look larger than life and the hand position isn't helping. Not keen on the hand in the second either. I'm wondering if the focal length of the lens you chose was a factor?
I'm going to be in a minority of one and say that I actually like the last one best of all. The background is good for me and I like all the red which I find very effective and it seems like a very striking shot. I also like the third one. Though the hands in the last two also seem a bit more prominent, they fit with the picture style more than in 1 and 2.
Maybe it's just me and I'm having a hand - fixated night