Hi Susie, bit of a catchup here...sorry I have not visited recently
Pure: I really like them both though probably # 1 best. Like the how the honey is twisting and knotting as it hits the stick. Honey is super sharp and the lighting really accentuates the warm pure glow of this natrual product
. On number 2 I like the flare which is a nice creative touch and you've caught the dripping honey in a way which is nicely to scale in relation to the composition as a whole.
Sparkle (boats): A nice nautical theme, representative of you where you live which I like. Sparkly indeed and I like the blue of the ocean (not sure if this is SOOC colour?) As everyone has said the spacing of the boats is pleasing and their square on positions show off the shape of the sails which is a massive plus +
Fall: Two very nice pictures. #1) Nice use of shallow DOF. Love the idea that this has been caught as it falls by the spiderweb. The soft bokeh background give this almost a motion blur feel which adds to the falling them. #2) Really like this one. Has an almost abstract feel to it with the mix of straight lines and round (ish) leaves. Reminds me of a contempary stained glass window of sorts. Of course none of this would be possible without the glorious backlighting.
Communicate: A beautiful picture - Period. Like how the landscape (mts and rocks) are in darkness, but the central elements (water and bottle) have some sparkle, some life to them which draws my attention in. A restrained but powerful piece. We always used to send these out to sea as kids...I miss those days and wonder if kids still do these things - Im guessing they'd get slated for polluting if they did....lol
Dark: Oh la la.....For me, forget number 1, its all about number 2. That flare being natural is almost saintly....in fact it gives meaning to the cliche "a moment in time" Like everything about it so no crit.
Big: I do like both versions you've posted, but its all about the frog, so crops and frames are just a side issue. What I really like is the frogs shimmering sheen in all is mottled golden glory. Your macro setup has delivered solid performance once again
Cut: I would choose edit number 2 but still some way off your usual high standard....sorry
. Feel like the low key lighting has not worked for some reason and there just isnt enough balance of vibrant light and deep dark to create interest. Of course the idea is a good one though needs rethinking in terms of execution. Would like to see you reshoot this one on an appropriate week.